Comentários em “Amor Eterno”: “Plano revelado!”

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posso estar errado mas acho que o roserade n aprende chicote de cipo(se eu tiv errado desculpe) da uma pesquisada antes de por os golpes

Lucario
Lucario Autor

Vou dar um olhada se estiver mesmo errado eu troco! Valeu!

The_Champion_V

Capitulo legal!Gostei muito, continue assim!



O que mais gostei: Da batalha
O que acho que pode melhorar: Nada
Lucario
Lucario Autor

Valeu! Estou tentando melhorar a cada capitulo! fico feliz que você esteja gostando!

Hikaru Hamano Inca

Que descaramento desse safadio sem vergonha.Eu daria uma lição nele se pudesse.Ele é muuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiitttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

cruel.

Para mim ele deve levar o maior fora do mundo.

E viva aos pokémons.

Continua...



O que mais gostei: O plano do Drew.
O que acho que pode melhorar: Nada.
Lucario
Lucario Autor

O fora já foi dado o que vai acontecer com ele é só lendo para descobrir!